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I had a talk with the
Shadow of a Shadow--
The girl on the other
Side of the old mirror
That sits in the attic bedroom
All dusty and ignorable.   

Her eyes were not like mine,
Her skin a different color.  
Her head thought backwards,
And that mouth shot challenges  
From a distant Wonderland
Not meant for me.  

Try this--
Hold a pane of glass before
It's brother.  The specter in the mirror
Peers back in an endless bouncing
Prism of light and crystal music
You think you should hear but never do.  

Then speak its name--you'll know it.
I did.  It was my name twisted and
Warped from misuse and repetition,
The feeders and eaters of current affairs
And the colorless now that modern will become.

It won't speak out loud--mine never did.  
But she moved her lips in a
Mockery of speech, in a rendition of
The daily grumble I pull so hard to
Block out.  

Maybe yours will talk to you.  
But if it does--don't listen.  
All you'll hear are lies.  
©2009 ~DarkNite109
:icondarknite109:

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I wrote this after a discussion in poetry class when the subject of a shadow of a shadow was brought up.

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:icondarknite109:
Why thank you!

--
"Dude, Halloween isn't about ghosts and goblins. It's about getting laid."
"Is there any holiday that isn't about getting laid?"
"Arbor Day."
:iconchima:
I'm trying to think of something to say about this, but all I end up with are images of mirrors and shadows. And the light that bounces in strange ways around the room when it's coming in the window and reflecting off a mirror, so you can't tell quite where it's from at once. and the way sometimes you see things in mirrors out of the corner of your eye - or even when you're looking straight on at them - that aren't and can't be there. and I see eyes - blue and brown and blue and brown and gold - looking out of the mirror and expecting to see something that I feel like I should know what it is and that I should be. I see questions - not on paper and not on lips, but floating through the air like a heat-shimmer and searching for a mind to curl around like a lover and find the answers in.

you make me think in poetry like light.

--
We feel the emptiness so we can find a way to fill it.
:icondarknite109:
Sweet!!!! I'm glad you're seeing cool things!

--
"Dude, Halloween isn't about ghosts and goblins. It's about getting laid."
"Is there any holiday that isn't about getting laid?"
"Arbor Day."
:iconone-winged-soldier:
...I honestly can't think of any way to describe this, apart from amazing!! I love it!

--
'Do you know who I am?'
'Do you know who I am?'
'...this is not a game of 'Who The Fuck Are You?'!'
~Eddie Izzard.

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